Complaining about the grade I received!

Natalie,

Remember that essay that I had to write for my English class? I worked so hard to get a good grade on it!! You remember I did everything possible to get an A! Well today she gave us the essay back, and I got a freaking 72!! I’m so pissed off!!! I for sure I would definitely have gotten an A on it! I was having such a good day until this happened, I’m so upset! I could understand if I hadn’t tried or put forth my full effort, but I busted my butt on getting a better grade than a freaking 72! I ended up talking to her after class, and she was critiquing me on the littlest things! It ended up being that all these little things combined brought my grade to a 72! Spelling, repeating words, incorrect punctuation, and indenting! OMG!!! I can understand taking off points because of these mistakes, but 28 freaking points? Hell no! Lol! Get this, that’s what she said was the only thing wrong about my essay! My paragraphs were good, sentences were complete, good supporting details, and my essay was very focused! It sounds like by her saying this that I would have at least gotten a B+! Ugh, I swear she hates me! She is always critiquing me about my work, I feel like she just grades me harder than everybody else. It’s not fair I hate feeling like this! Mrs. Gaitan also said that we couldn’t fix our essays, and the grade stood as is! With this 72 now, it dropped me from a 91 to an 88! I still can’t get out of my head how I got deducted so many points by the simple things! I understand its college but damn! Lol! She’s such a …..!!! Whatever I’m sorry I had to text you this long text message, but I just had to let it out! Have a good rest of the day ttul!