Summary of 9/21

On Monday September 22, 2009 in Mrs. Crawford’s class we got into our groups and discussed each one of our email etiquette assignments. There were four people in our group, we were missing Steven. First I read my email, and they critiqued my paper. Each one of them told me something I could do to make my email better. They gave me ideas on how I could add or delete some things. Also when I was reading it out loud to them, I could see my mistakes. I could see things while I was reading, and thought in my head this makes no sense. I guess you don’t see your mistakes when you are writing your paper at 2:30 am, and wanting to go to bed. Lol! Definitely after reading it, I needed to change some things, and go get help from the writing center. This by the way I scheduled for Tuesday at 4:45 pm. Brandon, Daniel, and Richard also read their emails, so what they did for me, I did for them also. Also some ideas popped into my head from their essays that I did not add in mine. We all had work to do on ours; none of ours were perfect like we wanted them to be. You also came into our group, and talked about some things with us. For example, telling us we should include who we are since teachers like yourself have so many students to remember. Also helping Daniel with his paper to make it longer, plus putting more ideas into our papers. We finished doing the group huddle, and you talked to the class about what needs to go in your paper again. I think some of the students were confused on what to do. Anyways you re-stated on what needed to be done, and how we need to schedule an appointment as soon as possible. Other than that you dismissed us, then went on to our next class